What’s wrong with this cartoon?

What's wrong with this cartoon?

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3 Responses to “What’s wrong with this cartoon?”

  1. Maria Ruiz Says:

    There is supposed to be the. Maria Rioz

  2. joyeckel Says:

    Response on FB by Pamela Allman: their

  3. joyeckel Says:

    It’s a mess. The misspelling makes it impossible to tell what was intended.
    I suspect it was “the,” since “their” would have to refer to the source of the music for the rest of the sentence to work with “anyone else.” If that’s the case, however, why insert any word there? It would be better as “listen to music.”
    I also suggest replacing “Does anyone else” with “Do you ever,” so it is more personal and congruent with “yourself.”

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